Bioshock Infinite : Beware the False Shepherd
on March 20, 2020
at 9:41 am
 
I liked the “Elizabeth POV” drawing so much, I decided to continue it in a Comic, I hope you like it as well.
Stay safe~
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This piece of work is your best yet, and is honestly what the KH3 comic should have been. Perfectly sized frames, shows the action perfectly, minimal dialogue. I gotta be brutally honest, i stopped caring for the kh comic because it became below mediocre. It focused too much on its story that nobody cares for for and the few shots of actual porn or too quick and too small.
If you were to rewrite it, i would have the set up be the guardians of light are defeated by the heartless swarm just like in the game. Kairi awakens infront of master X, he tells her has achieved his goals and created the perfect world, one of no pain, just pleasure. Then the comic transitions to pure porn, master x, tries to turn kairi to the darkness by having the heartless rape her. His attempts failing he decides to use the other gaurdians whove already turned to turn kairi. He uses anti aqua to turn ven and uses xion pretending to be kairi to turn a blinded sora. Sora who thinks hes fucking kairi turns and then he fucks the real kairi, in the end she turns and thats the end. The other characters like larxene, axel, riku can be thrown in somewhere in the middle just for more gratuitous sex scenes.
Hope up you take my criticism into consideration, im only trying to help.
Thank you! You are absolutely right and over time I regret doing the KH comic the way I did. It was just as the games itself, convoluted as fuck and without any passion on my part. I enjoyed making the first few pages but then it just got out of hand. I continued to long because of some of the positive responses which made it even worse. I didn’t plan far ahead and made up the story along the way.
Maybe I will do a short comic out of it, but for now, the fun of drawing this comic is far gone.
Things like this Bioshock or the NieR Automata short comic, are projects I can really stand behind.
That’s why criticism is important. It’s always nice to see someone liking my works, but taking time to write their honest opinions is extremely helpful, so thank you again.